A first novel by an author and published by a small press… odds are it will
be one of the many "snooze festival" novels that we receive and
discard after reading the first 30 or 40 pages. Nevertheless, I was pleasantly
surprised by Burn. It’s not the next Hugo award winner, but it is
certainly an excellent effort for a first novel. Billed as a science fiction
noir (whatever that may be), it is a cross between a Sam Spade novel and Blade
Runner… a combination that works very well.
In the 21st century mankind has ruined a good portion of the Earth
through exploitation of resources and pollution. In fact, most of North America
is now covered by dismal smog punctuated by perpetual black acid rain. The rich
are relocating to artificial islands in the Pacific, leaving the poor to fend
for themselves in the wretched environment. Entertainment and business are
controlled by Expedite, a corporation who owns the offspring of the Internet
that now features extremely advanced artificial intelligence and true virtual
reality.
In Old New York, we meet Cage. Cage is a private detective who was kicked off
the police force after conflicting with Expedite. He scratches out a living by
pursuing marginally profitable cases. His latest client, Janice Gild, has a lot
of money and a perplexing mystery. It seems her brother James was murdered in a
bizarre fashion that defies explanation. The police do not seem interested in
pursuing the matter. As Cage investigates, his path is littered with corpses
that met the same gruesome death as James Gild. Can Cage uncover the mysterious
force being used to cause people to burn before he is crushed once more by
Expedite… this time possibly for good?
The 21st century world that Lyons invents is fascinating. It is
full of androids, cyber-enhanced human beings, techno-slackers, genetically
altered human beings and an ultra-wealthy upper class that exploits the
downtrodden workers. The character development for Cage and the other main
character Jonny is well thought out and unveiled in a manner that keeps you
turning the pages. The plot was wrapped up a little too simplistically for my
taste, but is true to form of a Sam Spade novel to which Burn pays
obvious homage. Although the plot is wrapped up in one novel, the universe and
the characters lend itself naturally to sequels. I hope that sales of Burn
will be strong, providing Lyons with the opportunity to write another book in
this universe.
My major complaint is that the dialogue did not flow well in spots. However,
having attempted to write myself, I know it is extremely difficult to write
smooth-flowing dialog. Certainly, Lyons should improve in this area as he gains
more experience. However, the solid character development and well-constructed
plot make up for any lapses in the dialogue.
So grab your Fedora (acid rainproof of course) and bottle of Laphroaig scotch
and settle in for an enjoyable read.